Friday, June 11, 2021

The split T2

This is my tuhituhi from wiki 4.

Thank for reading this hope you have a good day.

 

She had been standing there for hours, surrounded by ice.

As the sun peeped its head over the distant mountains on the horizon, an orange and yellow hue filled the sky. The warmth of the sun was a gesture of kindness to her frozen hands, which she clasped together in front of her trembling body.

It was then that she heard it… Crack! It was as if the world in front of her was breaking in tow …

She was on the ice and her mom said that it was lunch but   she would not come. She loved to go on the ice but her mum said no it will break i said  ok i wanted to go on it so bad so i said no i went on it and i was sad to not listen to my mum but my dream was to go on the ice my mum came out and she saw me on the ice she said to get off but i said no i went farther and the ice was braking i was getting off and i went too far and i fall in the water the sun went up and the ice split i fall in and my mum saw me but what my mum did will blow your mind she was the best swimmer in the world she came in and   she got me out of the water when she got me out she told me that she was the best swimmer in the world i had a good blanket and we had so lunch it was warm and it was a good day one of the best days i have had in a long time we moved house we got all of the stuff.it was the best.


1 comment:

  1. kia ora amarah

    ka pai on your split tuhituhi

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